I honestly got to say that I been following since 0.3
And this game has been very very interesting and I like it quiet a lot
There have been some strange instances where it would randomly crash or a few instances where I would advance in the story only to have to for some reason go through all the scenes again in training Sera and Cecil.
Which had happened to me after I had completely dominated Cecil and was in the process of dominating Sera.
I ended up having to go through both of their Threesome scenes again which was really odd and even went through Sera's leaving scene again which im not sure if it broke my route/save or not since I cannot train Sera again.
I really love the story and all of the characters are really amazing I hope that much more content can happen with VI for I know a lot of what is going on is you having to train and deal with all the other side charcters for how close Mars and Vi is there are very little scenes and interactions you honestly can do with your Life Partner
The corruption and NTRing of the Hero is honestly amazing since so many other writers and stories have it come off as so over the topic or unbeliavable. I mean I know it's already unbeliable when it's a story of a demon dude with a Horse Cock destroying the fuck out of "human" Heroines.But like The fact that it's not just a instant mind switch just because Mars has a massive cock
That even days if not months later of constantly training these girls they ain't just absolutely loyal and addicted to you and willing to just off the Hero. That these girls with these huge personailities actually have to be broken down corrupted and lured in their own specific ways in order to get the results you ask for is just fucken amazing. Not many stories just do that. So many just have instant mind breaks because a girl get's meat with a horse cock stud that destorys them after a single encounter or just cheap out with a hypnosis or mind break and that's just.
Lame.
So kudos
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Started your game a while ago, the references and memes where interesting though it does seem a bit jam packed there for the heck of it sometimes.
The music choices are pretty good but it's actually really annoying to have the selection be background music, background music is..well.
Supposed to be in the background just being ambiance and not distracting from what you are doing watching or reading. It was difficult to read or enjoy the sexy times with the pop songs in the back ground. And yes I did mute it but then it just got too quiet too, I hope you include music that doesn't have heavy instrumentals and any sung lyrics.
It was odd how often the main character (who looks awful honestly)'s cock constantly changed size and shape. From being a pencil in the opening scene to literally 3m later suddenly being a thick red tipped mushroom.
As for the writing and what not well I mean.
It's a 3d hentai game about fucking the Holo girls
I didn't expect anything to be well done
If anything my last gripe is just how the animations had so many cuts Like even for just simple talking there would be 6 scene changes for the most basic things it just didn't felt smooth at all.
Considering this game hasn't really been getting any real updates in a long while..
Not to mention in the spam of a few months it went from 0.12 all the way to 1.0.1
The Patreon being down.
For something so simple and small in all honestly not to mention something that still seems VERY much in Alpha.
$10 is way over priced for what is basically a concept at this point.
There should be a demo for people to be able to play and to test out because the little bit of what you show off doesn't tell or help explain let alone show off what game play is about.
I seen bigger games be sold for less and to counter something you said earlier.
"Would be a shame to be paid for my work"
Yes, since at the moment it seems you are being paid for doing nothing but fighting with comments that ask for a **DEMO** Version.
you know how absolutely easy it would be to have a Demo set up right..?
Do what other developers do and simply have a earlier version like the mentined 0.12 and have that be the Demo.
You aren't showing off anything you don't already or plan on not wanting to have out there for free
And you allow yourself to have more exposure and trust from people that are able to confirm whether or not they want this game or not.
Again. 10 Dollars for something that honestly could be done in 1-2 hours.
That hardly has anything when there are games like this for free that has days worth of content..
It feels like someone trying to sell me a DLC for horse armor in Oblvion all over again.
I have no idea who or what this Curski person's plans and intentions are for attempting to call out Komisari as some sort of Scam Artist.
It has been quiet a while for any playable updates for the game, however as others have stated Komisari has been very open with the community and allows us to see many peeks and the game plan
Yes people can argue that games in this software and style are a dime a dozen and that there is so much freeware and other items and what not available that you could easily put in a game like this..
But this isn't just a random cookie cutter game
Trust me I play a fuck ton of games like this when I get fucken bored
And this game has always remained in my mind because Komisari actually puts damn effort into the game.
Characters actually don't feel like simple damn Sterotypes and have some decent back story and progression.
characters don't just start off cold and after a few days are wanting to bang you right off the back like some other games do
you actually got to put the time and effort into building the relationships with these girls.
There are mini games like fishing
hide and seek in a way
and just other lil mini games and nice little editions that make this game feel fleshed out.
Characters aren't just hidden until needed they have day and night cycles and go around their day.
There is always enough content that if your out going around doing shit your going to be hitting up and running into new events often.
animation is decent and again it just overall goes out of it's way to prove it' not just another clone.
There have been many Patreon and other backer supported games that have come and gone, People have been in this buisness long enough to see crap and the rug being pulled out from under them.
1000 people seem to all agree that this isn't just scam.
They see enough content road maps and progress to valid another month with Komisari and I do too
And for those that want to say he's just flying by living a good life with 5K a month?
Obviously that's not taking into condieration what Patreon takes out
and the fact that he still has t opay BILLS, RENT
And if he has to do something that isn't in his field
Like do a script
Or construct art
or anything and he has to hire someone for a bit to do that
he has to PAY them. not to mention depending on where Komisari lives
That 5K could mean even less since anywhere in Europe Euroes are worth more then USD.
yes he could have a decent life with it but
he is still ver much using this time and money to better the game
Because think about it.
Komisari HAS TO if they want the money to keep coming in.
They no longer have a job this IS there job now and if they want to keep seeing those checks
Which AGAIN is MONTHLY. People tend to forget how literally fast you can go through money especially if your only give it once a whole damn month compared to 2-4 times a month
he needs to continue to provie to us so we can provide for him
I picked this game up about a week or so ago looking and reading the concept and thinking it to be a very interesting game, I played others like this before and though most of them honestly were very lackluster or just simply died in the process of them being build. However I honestly really do got to say that i fallen in love with this game inparticular especially with the characters themselves. So many of them are so well written and so well thought out and you can clearly honestly see the way they develop as you begin your training and working on them. Rachel in particular is honestly my favorite thus far and I do hope that once these character's stories finish getting developed that we would be able to see them still going around interacting and getting little updates on how they interact when you develop other girl's stories. Like for obvious reasons having Debbie popping in and out in interactions where you would probably be given the choice to stop another student from bullying or harming another but if you end up getting Debbie to her Specific Role then Debbie now pops in and you get to just sit back and relax and enjoy the fruits of your labor.
Development does seem to be pretty slow but honestly compared to other games and devs that I seen in the past it does really seem like you aren't just twiddling your thumbs in the background waiting months to do another 0.0.1 that has like 5 words added. Your updates actually have not only mass in them but quality. I haven't ran into a single bug nor have I really run into any typos honestly, everything has been completely smooth no crashes no grafical errors no options that are hidden nothing everything truly has just been smooth sailing and i really appreciate that.
Keep up the good steady work and I can't wait to see how the rest of the game plays out throughout the development
Been Following this game for quiet a long while now and honestly It's getting harder and harder for me to look at this game and not just see it as another Star Citizen. I understand that game development can take a long while there have been other games that I been following for just as long if not longer and I seen a fair share of them die out either due to infighting, corpate stuff or just upping and leaving with the cash
But this game wasn't even 30% when the rebranding renaming and changing of the art style and animations at the height of the popularity which really didn't make any sense and it still doesn't since that seems like something you would do once you have all the other systems already set up and maxed out. Especially considering this game is basically Wifu Simulator with the amount of Princesses in the rooster and the mechanincs that have countless other options for side characters and kids to suddenly shift gears into focusing on the art and well. Adding more and more princesses to the list Which just gives you guys even more and more work to do on top of the stuff that should already take priority....
Yeah. It just really seems like you guys are just, grinding and farming away at the cash flow while taking literal years to go up just a .01.
At this point i'm just going to be sitting in the background wondering who is going to "finish" first
Princess and Conquest, or Star Citizen
I been popping in and out playing this game on and off for honestly i don't know how long maybe since you started working on it and having public versions out I'm honestly not sure since I do recall having really really early versions of this game on my old Laptop and this game has been in very slow development for the past few years. I do very much enjoy this game as this game has been along side some of the greats like CoC and TiTs as well as other games that I am forgetting the names of currently since I am super fucken tired as of writing this.
Anyways I love the concepts that this has and offers along with just being able to more or less have inpact on the city and characters you talk you and are in, it's always great to have the ability to do something and make a choice and actually see the pros and cons to that and having to constantly deal and see it rather then just it being a one and done thing and then being forgotten.
I will honestly say though that the one thing that i have always found to be well, troubling and hard for me to really stay focused on is the writing, especially with the earlier pieces that have been there since the beginning. More later content is a lot more fleshed out and cleaner with a lot less typos. (There are quiet a bit of typos in early Content) A lot of the writing seems written by someone who English is not their first language if you can get my meaning? A good example of this is during Sartornea's Questline after running into the Alchemist and you learn of something. One of the lines reads
"You tell your guards to let go of the man and just leave, defeated. You can't face them after making them waste all this time in a sensless mission. The guards feel just as bad as you did and get out of the town, leaving the three of you alone."
I ain't a english major I ain't a writer and I honestly hate English in general, however just it's really hard to get focused into the story the lore and the game itself and be invested into the matieral when most of the early and mid content is written like this. With sentences and lines that make you feel like you are reading the google translation to a JP game. This game has been ongoing for a few years so perhaps once you are able to if possible at all I would think it would best if you sat back and went back to a lot of your older content and re write and edit it so that the writing just seems more fleshed out as it should be considering that content is older then the virus that's plaguing our world is. We are almost on year 2 of that and this Game is almost reaching it's 4th year if not already passed it.
Love your work and I really do look forward to seeing how this all looks once you finally break Alpha and hit that big 1.0.0 Mark.
Just need a reread and edit of the content that's been there at some point is all
Spoilers
Oh not at all I'm judging it from how it is and how the content compares to what I have seen and played in the past and although to each game is different in it's own rights and by no way should it be in any way considered. a failure just because another game has features that this one doesn't or doesn't execute it as well as it does in other games. That's still not to say that it isn't justified for me to be able to do so, after all it is a Game that follows a set path and principles as other's in it's same genre as is expected as Your every day AAA game is when they come out. Seeing Looter shooters compared to looter shooters. I'm simply comparing This Harem, Build your force/City your choice matters conquest style Game with others in it's category. And by no means is it a 0/10 Game as I very much enjoyed myself playing it every single second in my style of doing it which is
making a split save whenever I see major moments where a set of choices changes how the game would end up playing out like choosing which of the available captives can end up being your Wife, impregnating or raping a certain Npc and how it effects their standing with you when you meet them again to even if you simply just don't do anything when something happens.
The game itself is still by all means great it doesn't have to be something that takes days as you make it out to seem that I desire, after all I brought up a game like Overwhored which anyone could beat within a Work session, twice over if you know what you are doing, The sex scenes or Smut isn't that bad but they ain't really good either, the other game I ended up mentioning as well TLS The Last Sovereign doesn't have good Smut either honestly for how well written the story was and amazing some of the scenes were executed the smut was never really something to look at. Honestly I would skip it most of the time and when I got my girlfriend to play the game herself she pretty much did the same. You can't really have sex scenes that are basically as short as saying the ABCs and call it a "Good smut/sex scene" Especially considering that honestly it just comes to
"i thrust myself into her, i keep thrusting faster and faster as hard as I can go then I cum" and that's the scene. I ain't asking for paragraphs here nor do I expect any of you all to do that either. As a roleplayer and a writer whose been in his fair share of Roleplay and ERP servers I just came to know when something seems written just because they have and that's pretty much that
Honestly I had a lot more written down but I was doing all of this on Discord but obviously considering how long it was it was way beyond the character limit so when I switched to another tab and came back I found 1800 characters mission so sorry if I seem like I lost my fire or might repeat things.
The fact of the matter is that I feel that although it was a number you created on your own it is funny that your rating that you put that it seemed like I was putting you...honestly is pretty damn close to what I would honestly rate this game. Because I'm going to say this right off the back.
I love this game I put a shit ton of my time and effort into this game, dozens upon dozens of saves and hours put into this game to see the different layouts and results of choosing or going ways I didn't in my first play through, I love these characters that were created and I enjoy the concept, but a 4 out of 5 to a 4.5 out of 5 are not good ratings for this game at all and I will tell you why.
For a game to get a High rating like that anything close to a 5 or fuck it even a 5 out of 5. Requires you to have voice acting that make people believe that they are this character that they understand and can make the characters they play come to life, music that sets the tone for the scenes and help basically lead the Player to feel the emotions you want them to emit when something awful or amazing happens. And because of how you yourself are trying to put how this game is and explain to me how this game's Choices are then I'm going to put further emphasis on this.
If you are going to have your game go the branching route route then just like other games that give you the option to actually feel like that Character is you and the choices you make matter to further add to that 5 star Rating. you have to make sure that each Choice DOES in fact matter and not just be something that "happens in the background" Because this goes hand in hand with 2 other things you must have in order to get that legendary rating. A solid story that pulls the players along wanting them to get ready to see the next scene to learn more about what's going to happen to feel like they are the dragon and that whatever happens to that dragon and the people in it's life is happening to you and the people you care about. A story that keeps players in their seats which conclusive Endings yes Endings. That collect everything you done everything you said everyone you saved went easy on captured executed/killed impregnated and sold away. Into it's own ending that can actually show you "hey. Your choices actually did matter" Even if they are just Bad ends/game overs. Not just something that only changes a scene or two depending on if you had a certain waifu. And this goes into that second thing which is Solid Character Development with conclusive ends for all of the Major characters that you have in your campaign. If you make it so that a random peasant girl you meet and can rape and creampie at the beginning of the game ends up hunting you down and gives birth to your spawn. I want to know how she ends up after words if you went so far as to bring her back where in any other game that could have been the only scene you ever seen of her.
And this goes for every single other character that we come across to that ends up being a major character being either someone we can capture or just a reoccurring character. They have to have arcs that shows them having some kind of character development that helps you understand and believe that they actually exist in this world and are being effected by what's going on around them. So far the only real major people that we see this going on with is with the witch the farm hand and the inquisitor. The last 2 due to the fact that they can become your Waifu with the inquisitor already having a pregnancy arc that plays into her major plot line with the Witch only being shown to develop when she interacts with those that enter her cell like the Farm hand. All of this goes together to help just make the world seem real, help bring the story out and help make the Player enjoy the story. If we are given a choice we all want to see how it plays out after all.
So along with Story, Character Development. Ending(s), Music, Voice Acting There's also character models and just visuals. the "graphics" of these games that are what we see and interact with have to be well done and good enough that it makes people take out their Screen shot app to take pictures of these characters to keep around or use to rp as or make fan art of. And honestly So much fucken more that all lead to a game being Rated the way it is.
In all honestly though I hate the 5 Star system and I prefer 1-10. And if I were to rate this game it would be at it's current state a 6/10. The art is decent the music is decent, the story is small compacted and just gets to the point for a lot of things. It focuses way too much on Balthorne, what he wants how he sees things his motives even going so far as to risk the rest of his nation on order to see him protected yet. We are the ones going around the cities the land farms Churches boat yards and we hardly see anyone impacted by what's going on or the fact that a dragon is out and about despite everyone seeming to know about it. It just really makes the rest of the world seem small, you are out here making huge scenes killing people kidnapping people and everyone goes on with their days as if nothing is wrong. Voicing is decent Character development seems very short. The only people that seem to really be acting like "i just got kidnapped by a dragon" are the 2 elves and the Abbet. The inquisitor going so far to Game over you if you don't follow the right steps when you capture her, the Witch basically being hostile with you 24/7 even when other captives go out of their way to make her behave. And the Abbet because she sacrificed herself to you in order to protect her fellow Nuns and rants your ears off even when she's worshipping your cock. Everyone else is just "this is my life now, cool" even the 2 cat girls that you captured as they try to steal from you just basically give up even if you untie one of them she doesn't do jack shit to help her sister and try to escape despite the fact that they are basically ninjas. Just waiting for you to next serve you whenever you desire like they been doing this for months. Granted A lot of their story most likely will be fleshed out and finished by the end of the 4th chapter when the game finishes. but that doesn't fix what is there now and how everyone is now with the game at basically 3/4ths done. With all of this, this game is no more then a 6. Once the final chapter comes out and everything comes together It will be bumped up to a 7/10 Hell maybe even a 8 out of the end if you do go the extra mile on things but where it stands as it stands. This is a average game that can use some improvements polishing up and having some features and it's core functions touched up on.
You can agree with me or not at the end of the day this is just my own opinion on a game that I have every right to criticize especially when it's a game I have played and enjoyed and have seen and played others like it. Go ahead and see TLS and other games like this their own community post. You'll see me there saying my own piece and talking with the devs there too. Keep up the good work and keep making this game good because hey
At the end of the day
it's still a good game. If I can sit down and put a few days of my time on this playing around and just ignoring my pestering girlfriend to play minecraft with her. It's a game that's worth everyone's attempt.
So I just played your current version of the game, and quiet frankly I do happen to enjoy it quite a bit. It's almost like a smaller simplier yet still as fun of a game version of TLS The Last Sovereign. Where your Character basically has the ability to make choices that actually have impact on not only the story that is being told, but the characters that are involved either directly or non directly and the world iteself....just not to that big of an effect. For instance *Warnign Spoilers* When you basically bite off the Arm or Dick of Balthorne, he ends up basically being perfectly fine despite it being a wound that is very fatal but a wound that would (and honestly should like with the arm) have a chance in his Art.
A lot of the "smut" or "H-senes" also are pretty lack luster at best, being really short or just not seemingly have as high of importance and are written like a bored girlfriend having to erp with her constantly horny boyfriend. There's scenes that basically once they start last like 4 slides despite just starting. Considering the main concept of this game revolves around this all mightly powerful dragon basically laying with every female he can get his hands on you would at least expect the Smut to be to pair with the writing of the story considering it does take a good chunk of the Game's Content.
Considering the "Conquest" section was just developed and is in the works I would like to say and suggest that I do hope it does end up getting more fleshed out and made more "Difficult"? I suppose. Considering at this time if you do things right getting the Wolf and Merc Hords in your Army before The Showdown happens you basically end up with control of 50% of the map. Not to mention that if you just power up the Proteans or any other hord you could steam roll the other remaining Fiefs in 4 days.
This continues on with what I just said previously but I say that Act 4 needs to be the more..."Content packed" of the Acts only since the rest of the Acts are completely barren at best. Act I is about 5 minutes long with Act 2 being just the same amount of time considering that the only major thing you need to do is pick one of the 3 Lairs from one of the 3 Areas you are allowed to explore to settle down in. In all Honestly Act's I and II should be combined together as that would basically all be the "tutorial" area for the game.
Act III gives you a decent enough amount of time to try and scatter around and gather your forces and Harem members with a bunch of content that will have you quickly eat up the time that you are given to prepare for the attack. Which admittly when it does happen...was pretty lackluster when it happened considering this would be more or less considered a Quick Time Event if this was a Console Game. Do 2 hits Say 2 things and that's that. You Win, I kind of wished that there was just more to it to that fight, not only with just how it was executed but that it seemed like it wasted all that Prep work you made. It didn't matter if you had every possible Hord Unit with you if you made traps if that the hords all liked you and were powered up, if you had one of the Lair's Optional Hoard/Members on your side like Mother and if you had high stats. You get the same result if you were that well prepapred and ready then if you did the bare minimum with the Huntress somehow storming your Lair and heading right for you without anyone attempting to stop her or chase her down or even attempt to aid until the very last second but the Merc Commander. I do get that she's this old Veteran Dragon Slayer that has countless dragons slain under her belt but your Lair is basically a massive Dungeon with dozens to hundreds of Minions all around and in it and your at the very end of it snuck away in a corner, like what if if you broken and made say Sabetha and Inej or Naho submissive or obeident enough, that you could have them as guards of some kind and that they coulda appeared in to assist against the Huntress?
This goes into Act 4 in which I feel like despite it being the "Conquring" stage that you should still be able to interact and continue going along doing stuff like exploration as the only major difference is that you are no longer being hunted down and Balthorne is staying tucked away in his Castle while he calls back the majority of his forces not just from his current Area but from all other remaining areas in the Country, aside from the few reserves that are left in every Area it should be way more easier for you to explore the Area and go around your days without having to worry about getting caught by a patrol or something. That way you can spend some time to try and go through what you weren't able to complete and get characters you might have missed when you were too busy panicing over the Time limit. Maybe you can even make better use of your hords as their use is pretty lack luster if pointless, why would a Dragon who has a army of Wolfman Mercs and Imps at his disposal and only ever use them to build some traps or to hunt down 1 little witch? Why not try and send them out to do some small little Raids here and there to weaken a Enemy Area? Send them out to capture some woman for you to breed or to use as sacrafices? If a Captive ends up being broken in enough or if their obeidence slash loyalty is high enough like Mina or Heloise. Why not be able to send them out in order to act as spies or sabatores? Having Heloise Return back to her Castle at Bastion regain control of it and stay there slowly weakening the Defenses. When you go to finally lay siege of it she could open up the gates herself or send off some of the troops out on some pointless mission to further weaken the Army presence there or Hell even just "Surrender" to the Dragon saving everyone from any needed bloodshed if you happen to be known for being a Nice Dragon?
Overall the Game itself is pretty good as Said it to me is like a mixture of TLS and Overwhored and it is something that I am looking forward to see how it all comes together at the end and my only issues were simply on just concepts and features that I myself in my opinion would help further improve and make the game and the choices we make and the efforts we go to do and get certain characters seem more impactful.
So far it's a really good game and I quiet like it, it reminds me a lot of some of my more favorite Html choice based rpg adventure games
like TiTs (Trials in Tainted Space) CoC (Corruption of Champions) among others that I can't for some reason recall fully. And I really enjoy the idea of being able to Control your own kingdom and do what you desire with the citizens under your rule which really takes things a step further then what most really good written hentai games end up doing. That only really give you the bare minimum or just have you effect important npcs at best. But the one thing I really really would wish to happen is for someone to do a really long proof read and recheck of all of the choices in the game. Since I am about 460 days in and I have been noticing that a LOT if not every single piece of text has some kind of typo or incorrect information. Not to mention a lot of the choices also happen to be wrongly labeled which has players who don't save inbetween choices end up being stuck with a choice they thought they wanted only to later find out that you picked the wrong one. A big example of this is Lucretius's big choice of corrupting or purifying the city. You hit purify and you get the text result that tells you you chose corruption, you chose the corrupt option and you get the text result for purifying the city. Some don't even work like in The purple Succubus Devil girl (forgot her name) that you can basically name however you want's current end content where you choose what school you want to focus on. I spent a good 5-10 minutes debating what it was I wanted only to end up realizing that none of them mattered as I was only able to choose Destruction Magic to even continue the story all the other options don't do anything.
Again so far really good game but just requires a really good proof read and a look in the code, there was another instance that I don't recall were exactly but all of the times the game was going to mention either your character or the character you were taking to you just got the code that was suppost to help the game see what to call you like "If boy say He"